Desert+Peer+Assessment

IMPORTANT MESSAGE: Danny, Kyle and Nicole from C block need to post their Peer Assessment to the Grassland Peer Assessment page or suffer grave consequences.

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 * __0/5 Biome Introduction__**: You guys have a nice map that indicates where the North American Desert but you NEED a map of the World showing where all deserts are located. Also, you need a caption or descriptive paragraph describing where it is.
 * __8/15 3 Distinct Locations__**: Your paragraphs describing Antarctica and Kalahari are really descriptive. Descriptions drew us in to the website, it was really interesting. And I think the Death Valley was a third one. There were no videos.
 * __3/5 Food webs__**__:__ Your food web is good for the Kalahari, and there is a caption explaining what’s going on. You have a description for the Antarctica food web but no picture.
 * __1/5 Highlighted Species__**: It could use more pictures and MORE clarification.
 * __5/5 Climate & Terrain Descriptions__**: Great descriptions.
 * __3/5 Layout, Design & Grammar__**: No spelling errors so far, good points. Your webpage could use headings for better/clearer navigation.
 * __4/5 Research Integration:__** You did a good job citing all your information and pictures. Some pieces of information could use citing though.
 * __4/5 Citing/Intellectual/Property/Copyright__**: For a few pictures you need your links, and for some information you guys should cite it.
 * __5/10 Collaboration:__** You guys didn’t really discuss stuff on your wiki. You guys could have discussed what to do and gotten it all done, with even better descriptions.

Total: 33/60

Desert Biome peer revision.

Introduction 2/5
 * There was no labels to tell us what was what
 * There is no Paragraph explaining it
 * Where is the intro paragraph?

3 distinct locations: 9/15
 * You have no plants that are in the biome.

Food Webs: 2/5
 * You only have one food web when you needed 3, one for each location
 * You should describe it more

Highlighted species: 3/5
 * You need to describe your animals
 * You need more species

Climate and terrain: 5/5
 * You have all of the requirements

Lay-out design and grammer: 5/5

Research integration: 2/5
 * You need to do citiations for all the facts and info you have

Citing … ect: 3/5 Collabaration: 8/10
 * You need more citations for picture and stuff

total 39/60