Tundra+Peer+Assessment

IMPORTANT MESSAGE: Ryan and Greg from E block need to add their Peer Assessment to the Alpine Peer Assessment page or suffer severe consequences. ^Geez Thanks. Next time an E-mail might be appropriate. ^What's wrong with putting this message on your Peer Assessment page? It got your attention, right? this is shawn and david from c block. please get along. no fighting :D

Peers Assessment

Biome Intro-Should have summarized in your own words. No descriptive paragraph for the map. 2.5/5pt.

- make your you tube video link as a video widget

3 Distinct Locations- Instead of copy and pasting the words you should have summarized them into your own words. Also the urls that you gave don’t work 3/5pts.

Food Webs- The pictures are good but there are no urls that can open that work. But they are good pictures 3.5/5pts.

Highlighted Species- The description are copied with no URL. 2.5/5pts.

Climate& Terrain Descriptions- stop copying and pasting and fix URL’s 4/5 pts.

Layout, design & Grammar- Too much space in between the topics. There are random things that don’t make sense in the beginning and ends of topics. That’s why its better to summarize. 3/5pts.

Research Integration- The you tube video could have been made into a widget and shown. Too many things were copy and pasted but parenthetical citation was used properly. But the URL’s have to be fixed 3.5/5pts

Citing/ intellectual property/ Copy right- Good job on this one you have many links and credit for your websites but there broken 4/5pts.

Collaboration- Good job communicating with one another 5/5pts.

Total-31/45

Tundra Biome: Biome Introduction: 4/5pts. 3 distinct locations 5/15 pts. Food web Climate and terrain descriptions 3/5 mpts.
 * You have to captulize at the beginning of the sentences.
 * No pictures,maps.
 * There are no suggestions of places to go and visit
 * Should do separate food web for alpine tundra and artic tundra
 * Didn’t write how long sessons last and percipitation

killed it.. 46/50 pts.

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