Boreal+Peer+Assessment

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Biome introduction- Your introduction is boring, use imagry and not straight facts after facts. Show me a vidoe of some one hunting in the biome, SELL it to ME. Those are good facts and accurate but very boring. Not much imagery to the paragraph. 3/5 3 distinctive locations- there was great facts and it seemed very fun to go there and I myself would visit the place 11/13 Food webs- the food webs were great and showed good information for the trip 4/5 Highlightede sepecies- there were very interesting animalls and you guys explained them pretty good..not gonnna lie. 5/5 Climate and terrian- there was great climate and it did explain what kind of cloths to bring and activities to do. 5/5 Layout and design- the laypout was good and it showed were everything was and is. 5/5 Reasearch integration- the there was good work that was sited but there could be videos 5/5 Citing/ intellectual- there was good links but it didn’t connect to all the images that were cited 3/5 Collabortion- there was not too much callobration 5/10

Boreal Peer Assessment Biome Introduction: 2 / 5 pts
 * 1)  You need to link your Boreal Biome Map! This is really important. Also, you should include either a caption or paragraph explaining the map.

3 Distinct locations 4 / 5 pts You had 3 distinct locations but did not have sources for all pictures. Food Webs 4 / 5 pts Had accurate food webs and labeled the consumers but the pictures have no link for it is copied and pasted. It would be nice if you used gliffy to make an actual food web. Highlighted Species 4 / 5 pts
 * 1)  Has good information but there is no link and the pictures are copied and pasted.

Climate and Terrain Description 4/5 1. You forgot your sources again. 2. Where do you describe the climate? Layout, Design, And Grammar 5/5